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Yay another flash animation!
The lovely music is made by Many many thanks to Enjoy!!~ \^o^/ Don't steal! That means don't edit, don't post somewhere else, don't claim as yours, etc, etc... Comments
haha this is great,
sorry no advanced critique here, but maybe you could have made more closeups, as i couldnt really see their facial expressions. amazing otherwise. gw very cute. and lovely concept -- ◄tal4life► ---- SUPPORT °jark AND °matteo! ---- *EMOclub ~Teens-Of-DA~The-Emoticon-Club ---- Very very very nice. I just got done reinstalling flash and messing around, was about to submit my thing when I saw yours say "Click for animation," which immediately peaked my interest.. you're very good.. I can't draw like that.
-- And in the dawning of a new personal era, one loses themself within the torrent of an emotional battle to stride foreward with perserverance and such a force that those who seek to dissuade them know to not interfere lest they be cast aside from the path. thats freakishly too cute Oo
no critique cause its too nice -- adoarable. and the music by bryan (aka kenskaii) is very appropriate also. hehe nice with the art too. im not an expert or anything but her walking towards the snowman is a bit awkward... it isnt smooth and a bit jerky... i dunno how to fix it but yeh.. thats my opinion. great flash done altogether.
-- I thought it was great too, the vector graphics are excellent. The lead characters eyes look great, and I like the anim,ation of the snowman the moment she walks up to him.
One thing I noticed was your "Play" button (or movie-clip). To click on it, you actually had to click the content of the clip, which was any part of the "Play" text itself, and because it was spinning, it was like shooting a moving target. You can expand the hit-state of the button (if it is a button) or put some extra alpha-0% content on a frontal layer (if it is a movie clip) to make the area you click on be a larger oval or something around the text. It just makes buttons or clickable objects in Flash easier to find and utilize. |
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February 1, 2006
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